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chapter 2 if you will ---------------------------------------------- Lenore awoke in the sea beneath the tide, feeling crushed by the weight of the ocean and knowing only darkness behind her she swam ever upward as the salt of the water burned her eye's. straining against the undertow her lungs felt...

i love feedback, anybody reading please pm me on what you think... i have several idea's on how i want the story to go, but im conflicted on how long it would take to get to certain places i want the story to be.

lenore walked calmly into the apartment to jhons room, everything was silent except for grunting and soft rustling behind his bedroom door. it was just the same as she left it except colder as if the ac had been left on all night. the door was slightly ajar though she didnt leave it like that, pushi...

lenore feeling herself come back to her senses stood towering over the cowering cretin, "wait for what?" lenore whispered with venom. francisco said " i can save him, and we will leave you alone... just let me use my phone please!", lenore announced as if to no one in particular when she started wal...

lenore opened her front door and walked carefully inside. a voice rang out clear in the early morning air "would you hurry up?", it sounded sweet and petulant all at the same time. walking into the living room, lenore see's a vary pale male with a suit that might be worth more than what she owned in...

before the sun rose, lenore quietly slipped out of bed and got dressed. lenore quickly left his apartment to head home, she grabbed rolls and some butter as she headed out the door. the sky had started to turn purple as the earth slowly turned to the sun once more, holes that were poked in the ether...

lenore awoke to a feeling of dread, she looked over at jhon asleep next to her. he was snoring lightly, still healthy. lenore cuddled up next to him to fight the terrors of her dreams that she couldn't quite remember. jhon had been a bright color in her otherwise dull and apathetic life, and she wou...

I haven't seen anything going on in this forum in awhile, I've decided to start writing. anybody is free to interject at any point, i only ask no inner monologue. the protagonist is the daughter of death, she was conceived on a night when death walks among the living. conceived October 1979, born in...

going about a minute into the forest i find a little clearing which looks like a fair place to start digging, getting on my knees i use both hands on the half coconut shell to remove the topsoil. almost a foot down i find the clay i was looking for, grabbing a hand full i run back to the unconscious...

"hahaha, get information from agent number one, sure. " i toss over the axes head,and kneel back down. after whipping my hands on his shirt i open both eyes and turn them to the sun and then way, one eye is dilated. looks like he will be out for a while." i need these bandages cleaned to prevent inf...

"there is no guarantee i can save him even if i try. so we need to decide if we want to patch him up or chop him up"

feeling snide i say " no shit, this fool is dying because i cant stop the bleeding." needing clay, i wrap a quick bandage, as i start to go get up for some dirt i see the id."oh"

running over to the fallen man, i put him in the recovery position. then i gently palpitate the wound to see the severity of it. noticing that the main part of the damage dealt was on the hind of the skull and not the neck meant that his spine should be intact. due to the amount of blood(head wounds...

"If y'all feel up to it, we need to make tools and also make a beach sign today if we can. im hoping that now a day has passed, we may get spot planes or boats today."

i hand him the shard when we leave (white white-beater, white under tee, plaid button up 4xt shirt, baggy blue jeans)

i wake up fairly early, though it was lit, the sun hadnt crested the the horizon yet. i find some long and thin driftwood to stoke what little embers were still lit and throw the half shells of coconut on, go over to borgus to lightly shake him."breakfast is ready"

"sure" i walk over to where the coconuts were gathered and started to scalp the ones with a rind and used the shard and the flat of the axe head to drill some holes. "you know these rinds im sure would dry out nicely to make good, quick kindling". "if you want, mr borgus, ill make you a set of limes...

walking over to the guy with the fire circle, i say" couple hours and i got the axehead and a slender shard, it took forever to grind out a slicing edge with the limestone. my name is sterling by the way" as i extend my hand. "figure it would be easyer to crack them coconuts with somethin hard an sh...

waking from a short slumber, i go and put my damp clothes back on. looking around i see lots of sand and an island forest in front of me. from the larger out cropping of stone nearby, this island probably has lots of limestone. now that some of the midday heat is gone, i decide to craft a wedge from...

just after waking and being all soggy on some random beach, i notice its about noon and hot as frak. feeling really tired, i go and take my clothes off to the skives and lay them on a boulder, then go sit under a plam tree to relax. some dude walking away was mumbling about stick and firewood?