haha.
Feign Shadow - a song.
I can feel the urge passing
But such an inviting fall
Below me
Such an inviting fall
I can leave it all.
Just leave it all.
A shadow all around you
It's the guilt that weighs you down.
It goes on and on and on.
Initiation.
What just happened?
It's tempting me again.
It doesn't go away this time.
Such an inviting place
Below me.
I can leave it all.
Don't leave me!
A shadow all around you.
Companions near betray you.
Initiation, initiation.
You've pulled the wrong switch
And turned off the light.
It goes on and on and on.
Again.
You just need to jump into that pit.
You see it all
One - last - time.
The shadow's gone now.
No guilt weighing you down.
I pull the switch, turn on the light.
Initiation, initiation.
What just happened?
Feign shadow once more.
You'll die right there.
It was all just a thought.
Feign shadow once more.
Word art sort of
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DomTar275
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Re: Word art sort of
Consider that a divorce.asdfkumquat wrote:Awwwwww...
I was gonna say you're aready married because of your famous wedding with hobobuster. But that's pretty funny.
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Yes, it is nice you are making use of the copy pasta.
Oh, what a pity!DomTar275 wrote:Consider that a divorce.asdfkumquat wrote:Awwwwww...
I was gonna say you're aready married because of your famous wedding with hobobuster. But that's pretty funny.
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DownSpaghetti wrote:Heh, nice twist.DomTar275 wrote:I see the faces of my future life
As I watch, I observe my life unfolding
Their language is different, my mind rethinking
"Would I want to be his wife?"
My husband, a rock star, and I just a gardener
My son's in high school, my daughter a kindergartener
A big house, items with a high price
It's just a way of life
Don't worry though, I'm no fortune teller.
I'm on my computer, playing the Sims.
I saw your videos, they're really good.
And you're very pretty ...
Aw, thank you!
Shucks... 
nice song, asdfkumquat.
Re: Word art sort of
Can you please stop spamming this thread with bs? I believe the creator and users of this thread would appreciate it...
Quote of the Ages:
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Re: Word art sort of
Permission to delete this poop Shai?
I am the son and heir
Of nothing in particular
Of nothing in particular
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Wait bs?Shai'tan wrote:Can you please stop spamming this thread with bs? I believe the creator and users of this thread would appreciate it...
Yes, how rude of you to spam this thread. asdf would be ashamed of you.asdfkumquat wrote:Thank you. I was reluctant to continue with that and it was wrong. Sorry.
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Re: Word art sort of
As creator of this thread for sharing ORIGINAL arts I would enjoy that someone took down that plagiarized stuff. I'd issue a warning to spaghetti but I'm not really authorized... Enough of the spam! And some people have wondered why I'm not around much... I'm so angry I'll use art to express it!
The words are off topic
The people instigate
The clean up happens
The offense gets fixed
The change is temporary
The crime is repeated
The thread gets fixed
The creator smiles eventually
The words are off topic
The people instigate
The clean up happens
The offense gets fixed
The change is temporary
The crime is repeated
The thread gets fixed
The creator smiles eventually
Re: Word art sort of
Hope you're smiling now.
From now on, any post in this thread that can be considered spam will be deleted.
From now on, any post in this thread that can be considered spam will be deleted.
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I am very nervous
I look out of the window
Oh god, it is death
I look out of the window
Oh god, it is death
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MASTER SERGEANT SHOOTER SERGEANT IMPORTANT PERSON OF SERGEANTS EXTREME
I'M A STEGOSAURUS!
MASTER SERGEANT SHOOTER SERGEANT IMPORTANT PERSON OF SERGEANTS EXTREME
I'M A STEGOSAURUS!
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I am so very sorry, as sorry as can be,lunar_furor wrote:As creator of this thread for sharing ORIGINAL arts I would enjoy that someone took down that plagiarized stuff. I'd issue a warning to spaghetti but I'm not really authorized... Enough of the spam! And some people have wondered why I'm not around much... I'm so angry I'll use art to express it!
The words are off topic
The people instigate
The clean up happens
The offense gets fixed
The change is temporary
The crime is repeated
The thread gets fixed
The creator smiles eventually
I didn't mean to hurt your beautiful thread.
With its prettiful wonders of sort of word arts,
It's almost better than the rule of sliced bread.
I hope you will accept my forgiveness,
As I bow down to kiss your feet,
I might also make a little nibble,
As I'm starting to crave fresh meat.
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A scientist, he ponders
Create life? He wonders.
Day and night he stays awake
Working hard until day break
The creature opens his eyes
now is time when he realized
He made a mistake, no way out
The creature tried fitting in
It didn't work. He had to sin. He killed a boy, took his life
Indirectly a girl, causing strife
Saved a drowner, got shot by a man
Was told never to return, only he can.
A deal was made, make a second.
The creator disagreed, but then reconsidered.
Make a second and risk life again?
Or send them both away, together until the end.
Frankenstein
Create life? He wonders.
Day and night he stays awake
Working hard until day break
The creature opens his eyes
now is time when he realized
He made a mistake, no way out
The creature tried fitting in
It didn't work. He had to sin. He killed a boy, took his life
Indirectly a girl, causing strife
Saved a drowner, got shot by a man
Was told never to return, only he can.
A deal was made, make a second.
The creator disagreed, but then reconsidered.
Make a second and risk life again?
Or send them both away, together until the end.
Frankenstein
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Your beautiful rhyme is a wonder true
A masterpiece fit for a master like you.
The stories you tell are gripped with emotion
The ever flowing words are in your devotion.
The atmospheres you create are a universe new
The verses is packed with the action you brew.
Your poems make me laugh, make me think, make me cry
The words infect my heart as I type this reply.
A masterpiece fit for a master like you.
The stories you tell are gripped with emotion
The ever flowing words are in your devotion.
The atmospheres you create are a universe new
The verses is packed with the action you brew.
Your poems make me laugh, make me think, make me cry
The words infect my heart as I type this reply.
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Goodness gracious, what's happened to me?
My hearing's gone, I cannot see!
The smell of burning sets my stomach churning
I don't think Hell's the place to be
My hearing's gone, I cannot see!
The smell of burning sets my stomach churning
I don't think Hell's the place to be
I am the son and heir
Of nothing in particular
Of nothing in particular
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Satan knocks at my front door
I'm wondering what he's looking for.
He reads my mind - "Why, can't you see?"
I guess the Devil's looking for me.
All for unforgiven sin
He fights me, and I let him win.
The guilt was just to much to bear
I wanted Hell, and now I'm there.
I'm wondering what he's looking for.
He reads my mind - "Why, can't you see?"
I guess the Devil's looking for me.
All for unforgiven sin
He fights me, and I let him win.
The guilt was just to much to bear
I wanted Hell, and now I'm there.
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Re: Word art sort of
I didn't like your poem, Squat, it wasn't even. Rhyming poems have to contain similar amounts of syllables in each line, and the accents have to fall in the right place.
